Jenny Huck
American Lit
Journal 8
30 October 2006
Jacobs – “Incidents in the Life of a Slave Girl”
The idea of audience plays out strongly in Jacobs’ “Incidents in the Life of a Slave Girl.” Our study of American literature has undergone a shift from writing whose intent was to present its readers with actual events comprised of real people to the writing of fiction. Jacobs invented a character in order to tell her story without actually admitting what she had done. Writers like
Columbus were essentially writing fiction in the way that they misconstrued the facts (making the natives appear extremely susceptible to conversion, the honesty of
Columbus’ men in not stealing from the natives) in order to convince their audience, in
Columbus’ case the king of
Spain, of the need to return to
America. I find this ironic that, when
Columbus was writing in 1492 he set out to make his journal appear to be based purely on fact; this “factual” writing has instead produced one of the biggest myths of our culture. Jacobs wrote her life story under the guise of fiction in order to protect herself from the scorn she would have received by “expos[ing] her own sexual history and reveal[ing] herself an unwed mother” (2030) on such a public stage. We’ve gone from misrepresenting fact to make it appear factual to misrepresenting fact in order to shield the truth. Essentially,
Columbus was doing the same thing that Jacobs did nearly 400 years later: both wrote for political purposes. He misconstrued fact in order to convince his audience of the need to return to
America; Jacobs misconstrued her life story into fiction in order to convince her audience of the need for abolition while at the same time not airing her dirty laundry for the world to judge.
While reading “Incidents” it became increasingly evident to me that the purpose of this writing was to “involve [free white women] in political action against the institution of chattel slavery and ideology of white racism” (2030). By speaking directly to the audience, affectionately calling us “reader,” Jacobs invites us into her innermost thoughts. She reveals to us those times in her life that she “would gladly forget” (2038) if she could. By employing the same technique that Brontë uses in Jane Eyre, (one of the “popular fictions of the period” (2030) that Jacobs models her work after), we feel that because she is entrusting her secrets to us, we should in turn trust her. Because she speaks directly to us, we begin to empathize with her because we like her, we trust her, we want the best for her. The audience, primarily consisting of free white women in the process of fighting for suffrage of women and slaves, is already susceptible to hearing the cries of injustice against slaves. As Jacobs points out, “human nature is the same in all” (2039). In this passage she is referring to the “tender feeling [that] crept into [her] heart” (2039) upon the attentions of a white man; however, it is the same when related to the emotions that Jacobs’ writing evokes in her audience. We all want to believe her because of the injustice she suffers at the hands of the oppressor.
In this way Jacobs’ narrative works much in the same way that Rowlandson’s did. Both wrote to an audience that was ripe for convincing. By describing the injustice she suffered at the hands of the “merciless heathen” (444) natives, Rowlandson created a myth that haunts us to this day. Jacobs also contributes to the mythology of the history of slavery in
America; unfortunately, the injustice she suffered at the hands of her slaveholder was true.
The tone Jacobs employed in “Perilous Passage in the Slave Girl’s Life” was almost overdone. While the narrative voice guides the reader through the story, at this point I didn’t see Linda Brent as a courageous woman but rather as someone weak, crying out for our pity at the injustice she suffered. She knew that her actions were taken with “deliberate calculation” (2038), but she still blames slavery: “All my prospects had been blighted by slavery” (2038). Her voice becomes whiny and pathetic in these sections in which she talks directly to the reader. Jacobs proves that Linda Brent was a strong woman. She lived in a “very small garret, never occupied by anything but rats and mice” (2047) in order to remain out of the clutches of Dr. Flint. She outsmarted Dr. Flint not only by escaping from him but actually living right under his nose, but she also found a means to escape from concubinage. I longed for her to use language that would elevate her to the heroic status she had earned for herself.
Instead she uses the word “poor” to describe herself, her situation, and her children throughout the narrative. In defense of her fornication with a white man she says: “I was a poor slave girl, only fifteen years old” (2038). Her use of stock gestures throughout the narrative also belittles the powerful message she could have portrayed. She confesses her sin to her grandmother: she “knelt before her, and told her the things that had poisoned [her] life” (2040); she “knelt by the graves of [her] parents, and thanked God [. . .] that they had not lived to witness [her] trials” (2044). I longed for the strong voice of Hutchinson and Bradstreet. She is begging for her readers to feel sorry for her.
It is true that I have “never knew what it was to be a slave; to be entirely unprotected by law or custom” (2039). However, it is just that fact that Jacobs uses in her favor in order to speak to her audience, to convince them of her plight. She uses the same technique that Rowlandson used to create an unjust myth of the picture of Native Americans. While at times Jacobs’ writing is at times whiny and pleading, it may have contributed to the emancipation of slaves. Her story helped to break through the barriers of slavery, to convince her audience that this story, written as fiction in order to protect her personal life, was the fact that slaves were facing daily. She used the powers of persuasion for a better purpose than Columbus or Rowlandson. However, it left me longing for a more powerful persona than she created in Linda Brent.